Just to be too sure
He checked each straw o hay
with a magnifying glass
To check whether they had gone bad
After checking each straw
He would toss them back
Into the haystack
At the end when he looked
He found that all the hay
Had turned to dark ashes



  1. Very nice metaphor indeed.

  2. It almost sounded like a never-ending story…the magnifier must have focussed a heat/light source Good job—and thanks for liking my poetry, too, at BY THE MIGHTY MUMFORD! HAPPY HOLIDAYS/MERRY CHRISTMAS!

    1. I’ve always been a fan of your poetry
      I read them whenever I get the time
      Thank you for the appreciation
      And the understanding.. Many people didn’t understand what was happening there
      Feels nice to see some people do

Its nice to share what you think of what you read

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